haiku #14

11 May

resting next to my
thoughts – your smile is sitting there,
i thank god for you.

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14 Responses to “haiku #14”

  1. Ji May 12, 2010 at 5:45 am #

    fabulous!

  2. wordsbyleena May 12, 2010 at 6:47 am #

    Just love the feeling in this poem. A beautifully captured moment.

  3. trisha May 12, 2010 at 8:54 am #

    too beautiful. so much feeling hidden in so little words.

  4. alexvonfox May 12, 2010 at 10:53 am #

    Wonderful!

  5. moondustwriter May 12, 2010 at 12:17 pm #

    love your haiku

  6. Jannie Funster May 12, 2010 at 2:44 pm #

    This is MORE than wonderful.

    And always a bonus for me when a haiku writer abides by the 5-7-5 syllables! Thanks for that!!

  7. brian May 12, 2010 at 5:42 pm #

    that is tight…and so beautiful.

  8. suzicate May 12, 2010 at 6:50 pm #

    fabulous…beauty, love, and emotion all rolled into one tiny haiku. Just excellent!

  9. Artswebshow May 12, 2010 at 8:14 pm #

    beautiful haiku

  10. oinky May 12, 2010 at 9:34 pm #

    lovely haiku 🙂

  11. shakira May 13, 2010 at 6:00 am #

    WOW.. such a wonderful Haiku…
    Mine is here
    Happy Sensational Wednesday!
    hugs
    shakira

  12. Ediomo Udofia May 13, 2010 at 8:45 am #

    Your haiku is simply awesome, I feel a huge sense of the picture within every line.

    You’ll love this: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/05/this-blood-i-cry.html

  13. megzone May 13, 2010 at 12:29 pm #

    wonderfull…
    this is one form that i love but somehow can never try 😦

    im here from Jingle’s rally
    you can check my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/thursday-poets-rally-vers-beaucoup-astrology/

  14. bp June 9, 2010 at 2:24 pm #

    this is so hot!! really you must publish your haikus!!!!!!

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