wishing wells

15 Mar

you called her
but it had always been
to her.

and now you get it.

but without relief.
for what you had not seen
weakened what was
to her.

she still prays.
but mostly
that time
can align
as well
as it heals


4 Responses to “wishing wells”

  1. kolembo March 16, 2011 at 3:13 am #

    Great poem. the aligning of eyes suggests that gaze has shifted from the person?

    • patrice berry March 27, 2011 at 11:45 am #

      if i told you, i’d have to kill you. i like that different people will receive something different from the piece, but you are onto what the words are to me. so to answer your question, sort of. gaze has shifted in the sense that perspective has changed.

  2. Promising Poets Parking Lot March 26, 2011 at 8:47 pm #

    apt words..
    Glad to see you write and post.

  3. 4valentines4words4poetry4you May 9, 2011 at 5:57 pm #

    this is very lovely poem .from kevin well done.

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