resting next to my thoughts – your smile is sitting there, i thank god for you.
fabulous!
Just love the feeling in this poem. A beautifully captured moment.
too beautiful. so much feeling hidden in so little words.
Wonderful!
love your haiku
This is MORE than wonderful.
And always a bonus for me when a haiku writer abides by the 5-7-5 syllables! Thanks for that!!
that is tight…and so beautiful.
fabulous…beauty, love, and emotion all rolled into one tiny haiku. Just excellent!
beautiful haiku
lovely haiku 🙂
WOW.. such a wonderful Haiku… Mine is here Happy Sensational Wednesday! hugs shakira
Your haiku is simply awesome, I feel a huge sense of the picture within every line.
You’ll love this: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/05/this-blood-i-cry.html
wonderfull… this is one form that i love but somehow can never try 😦
im here from Jingle’s rally you can check my poem at
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this is so hot!! really you must publish your haikus!!!!!!
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fabulous!
Just love the feeling in this poem. A beautifully captured moment.
too beautiful. so much feeling hidden in so little words.
Wonderful!
love your haiku
This is MORE than wonderful.
And always a bonus for me when a haiku writer abides by the 5-7-5 syllables! Thanks for that!!
that is tight…and so beautiful.
fabulous…beauty, love, and emotion all rolled into one tiny haiku. Just excellent!
beautiful haiku
lovely haiku 🙂
WOW.. such a wonderful Haiku…
Mine is here
Happy Sensational Wednesday!
hugs
shakira
Your haiku is simply awesome, I feel a huge sense of the picture within every line.
You’ll love this: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/05/this-blood-i-cry.html
wonderfull…
this is one form that i love but somehow can never try 😦
im here from Jingle’s rally
you can check my poem at
this is so hot!! really you must publish your haikus!!!!!!